Week 5 Choice blog post
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| This is my writing |
What goal does this piece of work connect to? This piece connects to use paragraphs with topics sentences and supporting detail.
How well have you achieved this goal? Explain I did well because I added lots of details to my story to make it interesting for the reader to have a picture in there head of what was happening.I also did well because I had a mix of compound complex and simple sentences.
What value have you shown with this piece of work? Why? I have shown reflect by changing boring words to make the story more interesting so the reader doesn't get bored.I have also been showing reflect in this piece of writing because I was using different sentence starters and tried to make the sentences simple, compound and complex.
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